Since you've got a good amount of ratings, but no one is providing any feedback..
The lines in general don't seem all that confident. That, and the shapes in general feel super iffy. That's sort of what breaks it for me, and I think others. It'd be nice to see this a bit more refined.
That being said, the colors used are beautiful, and I think that's something you consistently do pretty well.
Thank you actually
Something maybe more bold? (Thicker lines, stronger shade/expression?)
I'm glad I'm getting that right. I'll try some new methods to fit mood of next piece~
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